At every good thing comes an end

by Hebe   Aug 8, 2007


This poem doesn't represent the feelings that I have right now. Some pieces I thought up months ago, I just put them together with some new lines.
I know it's not really good, yet I hope you'll enjoy reading it.
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I see the stars upon the sky
Know that the memory will never die
Your mind seemed pure
Your love seemed true
A reason why I felled for you
If I got scared
You took the lead
You reassure words were o so sweet

But at every good thing comes an end

Cause now I know you've lied to me
And in my mind I don't feel free
Now feel my sorrow
Know my pain
Like after sunshine there comes rain
Can't much longer hold this strength
So when tears have fallen from my cheek
Know that death is what I seek

Written at 06/08/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man that's messed up. Everyone starts falling in love and next thing u know it's all sad. Great job 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I love this poem it is so good. great piece eveything goes together, awesome job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    I really like this poem. You get across your message of elation leading to sadness, which is what poetry is all about. I really like the contrast from being so happy that everythig is perfect, to feeling like you want to die cause your whole world has fallen apart. Great poem, which i really enjoyed reading.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Patience

    This is such an emotional piece and well written.

    Cicely

  • 17 years ago

    by jyzka

    Full of emotions.. wonderful piece!

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