Comments : That was a lie

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Sad poem. full of emotions. very short but very deep and say alot of things.

    great great work my friend

  • 17 years ago

    by The Nameless Poet

    Nice poem, thanks for reading mine...well im saying i live a life where in my neighborhood(newyork) anything can happen, and the things that happen, god doesnt really do anything change them, they just get worse, and me saying that is just expressing myself if something did happen to me, im not saying it now, but if somethin happens to me, than those words will have meaning, but right now there just words with no meaning, sorry if i offended u, but with all do respect poetry is meant to express yourself not shield ur words cuz someone else might not like them, great poem tho, lata

  • Well written and very meaningful :)