by Karl Wild GG23 Aug 8, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Born in the spring with all it's beauty and bliss, |
by adroit
What a beautiful poem with a wonderful, sincere message. Nice writing. Honest Luck. |
by Tara
This one caught my eye, with the Robert Frost title. I like the way you modernized the idea, and put it in words of today that people can relate with and understand. Another beautiful poem. ~Tara |
I love the Robert Frost poem from which I assume the title was taken (which is cool as titles can't be copyrighted). excellent rhyme scheme and flow. Great imagery/metaphor. But what is most striking about this poem is the aspects of truth in life you've captured just as well as Frost ever could. You write with the wisdom and experience of one well beyond your years. Great piece. |
I loved your poem it flows nicely! |
by AlaSkA
This is a dense read. im really not a fan of classic abab and al that jazz, but if the vocabulary is there. im all for it. your flow seems so laid back, where as alot of abab poems you can almost guess the last word of each sentance. |