Although very short the poem expresses so much emotion, you've once again done a fantastic job. The imagery and flow are great as always. 5/5 GG23

Deep and short.
Full emotions with great rhyming and word choice.
Great piece of writing.
Take care

I like it very much. It has great atmosphere and flaw is excellent. You expressed emotions with just a few words, that is impressing. 5/5

Aweh. I liked it. The lines aren`t too long so that the reader gets bored and the wording that you used kept me interested. I do, however, feel that a little more grammar could help. You do have some, but I don`t know; it felt like something was missing is all. Anyways, great job Darling!

5.5
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It was short but easily to see the emotions and how strong they were. 5/5
Nicole

I really like diz,great job.......

Amazing to read. Even though ever line was 2-3 lines the emotions where clear and deep and great rhyming.
Impressing.
5/5

I so love short poems, this one is very well done. Very sad but so true.
Peace and Blessings