Comments : Three Words

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I can relate to this poem so well, it's funny how love seems to twist in time into something much different then it once was. Excellent job with this piece 5/5 GG23 p.s. second line of stanza 2 is missing a later.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written poem, very true. Every stanza is excellent, but my favorite is:

    -Seems I'm finding it quite amusing
    How things can change so much
    One day I'm craving, wanting you
    While the next, can't stand your touch-

    I like the flow of the whole piece very much.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Sad. full of emotions. you loves shows in your writing take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is unique. You are very talented! This piece deserves 5/5 but still it isn't your best poem. Rhyming is very original.