Wow! Another amazing poem of yours. I like topic and you wrote this piece greatly. This poem is interesting and you created amazing atmosphere with simple wording. I am really impressed.
Well done 5/5

Damn, that is one confusing form to write, but you did a kick ass job with it.

Touching and so sad, the emotion just flowed through out.... although I am hoping its not true, but just know that I'm always here for you!