Superbly written piece. It is very original and emotions are expressed greatly. Topic is also excellent. It is short but still very powerful. This poem is simple but very deep. It really deserves 5/5

I think its beautiful how you would spend your last day.... very touching Jenni and well written.

Aww it's very cute and sad. Hope your little sister knows how much she meens to you! Beautiful poem. You captured great what person would feel/do when having a day to live.
Keep writing. 5/5