Living In Bliss (Collab)

by Jenni Marie   Aug 8, 2007


**Collab With Robert Kerry Gardiner**

Might I ask why you have chosen me?
Out of all the people that you see,
What makes me so special to you?
It's hard to believe that this is true

Tell me if you'll be mine forever
Will we always be together?
Tell me now if this is real
If it's my heart you want to steal

Am I the man you see beside you?
Can you tell me if this is true?
Am I everything to you and more?
Have you ever felt this way before?

Can't think of anyone but you
Promising to never leave you blue
Now tell me if you feel the same
Or if this is just some stupid game

I have these feelings deep inside,
That no longer I can hide,
Something sent from up above,
Just want to show you all this love

Don't know what I did to deserve this
For it seems I'm experiencing total bliss
Now know for sure you're the one for me
Our hearts entwined, surely this you see?

We will be together for all time,
My heart yours, and yours mine,
We will build on our happiness forever,
Because soul-mates we found in one another

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  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    You two have done an excellent job on this piece!!The rhyming was good enough...And it was really interesting to read...I espically like the last paragraph...It was truely amazing...Hope we stay in touch...
    Take care <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great piece of poetry showing your creativity as well as Gardiners work. Very nice collab, great rhymes and word choice. Really enjoyed reading

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    You've both written this very beautifully.... rhyme and flow was perfect and made for an easy read. You write well together.

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