You've both written this very beautifully.... rhyme and flow was perfect and made for an easy read. You write well together.

Great piece of poetry showing your creativity as well as Gardiners work. Very nice collab, great rhymes and word choice. Really enjoyed reading

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Fsams

You two have done an excellent job on this piece!!The rhyming was good enough...And it was really interesting to read...I espically like the last paragraph...It was truely amazing...Hope we stay in touch...
Take care <3