by Ironic Allure Aug 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
These words weren't written for rhythm; |
by Viola
This reminds me of Ian's poetry somehow. But anyways, I think it's beautifully writen once again. You have a way with words that makes each poem so meaningful. And surely those metaphors add such vivid colours to it. Each line in itself is so powerful and holds such deep emotion. I can really feel this one. It does something to my heart. |
by Ixora
0_0 this ones awesome...but laura honey what happened u never write anymore we miss u : ( |
by pookiengurgi
Wow that's so sad & sweet..and the title is very catchy.Good work!:) |
by kati
I love this poem!!!! |
by Lisa
Great work,was very powerful |