by Ironic Allure Aug 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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These words weren't written for rhythm; |
by Viola
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This reminds me of Ian's poetry somehow. But anyways, I think it's beautifully writen once again. You have a way with words that makes each poem so meaningful. And surely those metaphors add such vivid colours to it. Each line in itself is so powerful and holds such deep emotion. I can really feel this one. It does something to my heart. |
by Ixora
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0_0 this ones awesome...but laura honey what happened u never write anymore we miss u : ( |
by pookiengurgi
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Wow that's so sad & sweet..and the title is very catchy.Good work!:) |
by kati
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I love this poem!!!! |
by Lisa
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Great work,was very powerful |