Cute

You began this poem and ended it on the exact same note, which seemed to work perfectly in this case. Good for you, for thinking of that. :)

"To melt in so many ways"

^I thought that was a really unique way to explain falling for someone, so I just wanted to point that out to you. It sounds so beautiful.

It was simple, short, and sweet. I like it.

Aww that was sooo beautiful..u expressed ur love for this person in a wonderful and well-put manner! great great job..take care!

Wow... this is a great poem... i feel the same way with this guy i like alot.... but now its like over and i dont know what happened....

well anyways...
great poem...
keep up the great work

XOXOXO
Britt