Agent, Reaper

by SooperMann   Aug 8, 2007


There is an agent who works in silence
His abduction of you does not require compliance
your body will be left, just your soul he'll take
And a trail of despair he will leave in his wake

Some say he's from the light of heaven
Others, from the dark abyss
It is said that a deal can be made
But only if death is your wish
Legend states he's has a truly demonic feature
and that he is a very intimidating creature
I only know for sure of one thing
He's called the Grim Reaper

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was a pretty good poem, your flow has a few flaws and the structure was a bit rigid. But it seems that you are new to this, and you have a whole lot of talent. I'm sure you will grow into a magnificent poet. The feeling was very strong and the rhymes were unique and interesting. Just work on your flow, the syllables and all and the structure of the poem and it will look and sound so much better. I hope my advice helped.