Tis a very good glosa mandy bear, love the way you made the whole thing rhyme, tis a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

I don't like first stanza. Second is good and third is excellent. Fourth is o.k. Poem is very unique which is great. I don't like atmosphere in some parts of this piece, some lines are very powerful and few of lines aren't good. 4/5

You write really long poems but it was really worth the time =) It was once again another well penned work, I really like the structure of this poem, you have a great vocab.

You're really talented Ciao xD

I`ve read this a few times now, just forget to comment on it everytime that I read it lol. I absolutely love this, you have such an amazing way with words, it blows me away. Simply breathtaking.

"You know you're never gonna feel like that again,
And you know, sadly, that he doesn't really mind.
All those sweet nothings crack your plastic heart -
Watch as your "once upon a time" slowly falls apart."

I LOVE these lines, they make me want to smackyou `cuz I`m jealous of your talent lmao. Also, I think we found a new way to bond! Whoooo! I love this band, and seems to me like you do as well lmao.

5.5
heartchuu. <3

I LOVE BOYS LIKE GIRLS!!! i love how you put things together.

"Watch as your "once upon a time" slowly falls apart."

this is my favorite line.

5/5