by Twobit Aug 8, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
W all have a dream of shining bright |
by ASHLEY BROOM
This very good very easy to read...... Keep it up..... |
by Lindsay
This poem was nicely written. Simple and sweet. Some parts of the flow and some of the word choices could be improved, but other than that you did a swell job! :) 4/5! |