This is a great write it has alot of emotion in it it's really good i really enjoyed reading it keep it up 5/5

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It dosnt matter if its good in some peoples eyes
its what you feel thats why it is such a good poem nice job
5/5 =]

This is such a good poem..it touched me..very deep...u r a good poet..ur expressin ur feelings emotionally..beautifull..
Take care
U deserve 5/5
-sarah