Comments : You can't fool me anymore

  • 17 years ago

    by Viola

    This is also a very heart felt poem..i could feel you pain and frusturation while reading it. my favourite lines :

    the two people i trusted with my whole heart
    have broken that turst and tour me appart

    ^ i can can totally relate. i know the people you never expect to let you down sometimes do just that..and it hurts so much.
    this was another well written poem. keep up the good work! =]
    And never give up hope sweety.
    --Viola

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Excellent. I really like it.