Comments : Prove Myself

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    Just a few things to point out:
    -it should be "prove myself", not "proof"
    -it's confusing when you put "fing"
    -it will be taken a little more seriously if you use "you" instead of "u"

    I realize that this a very casual poem, but I just thought you might want to take those^ things into consideration. Good luck with your future writings.