That was an excellent poem, well written and I love the twist in it, very nice and the wording was awesome, great job ,keep it up, your friend Tracy d,,,,,,5/5

To A. Soul:

Nope, twining was intended. It's definitely a word - at least according to Oxford American Dictionaries and dictionary.com. I think it's just a more old-fashined usage of the root "twine." You've got the right idea, though.

The last line is to finish off the poem and attempt to put it into perspective. I'm still trying to decide if it works. Thanks for the comment and the critique.