I liked reading this poem. It was a rather simple idea, but you made it quite interesting to follow. Your rhyming was not forced at all, and it didn't throw off the flow. Which is good.

The only suggestions I would have is to make the following line a little clearer:

"I'd do the world best or worse"

Just because it's hard to tell exactly what you are trying to say here. I'm not sure what you mean by it exactly, but it probably could be easily made a little clearer.

The other thing is that you might want to specify at this part -"in my feet"- that you mean bare feet. It's probably not necessary, but it's just a thought because it sounds a little awkward that way.

Nice job with your poem, I really think it's good. :)

Thanks, Jaime.
It means a lot, you looked that much into my poem, and gave me such great, suggestions. I see what you mean, I fixed those 2 lines, I hope they're more clear now. Take a look and tell me what you think?
Check out some of my other poems, and tell me what you think.
Thanks..
Jenny

Amazing! :)

Just take off the words 'for you' after the crimes part (to avoid being redundant) and it'll be absolutely perfect!

Haha Okay.
Done.
Now you can read it with perfection.
Thanks, a lot, Jaime. :)

This was great.
I really love this one.
I'm adding you to my favorites.
5/5