All She Wanted Was You....

by X Kashies Misery X   Aug 9, 2007


She knew she was different and that there was nothing she could really do,
She wasn't ugly but she wasn't pretty too,
She was a black beauty but she wanted to go blond,
She always got good marks but that still wasn't good enough - what was wrong?
She hated herself just as much as others hated her,
Being neglected and rejected by her peers she was an out cast,
Trying to cry like she always did,
Maybe that would make her feel better but those tears didn't drop a bit,
And the pain was terrible and it never went away,
She lived with it each and every day,
And the way people looked at her - there was nothing to keep on living for,
Until you came over and knocked on her door,
She saw your face and you saw hers,
You knew her from school - she was a loser of coarse,
You started to talk to her and she instantly knew,
That if there was anything out there for her it was you,
So each and everyday she got up just to see you once more,
You never liked her but to her you were the one she adored,
Time went by and you still didn't notice,
Weeks went past and she still smiled and floated,
She hardly spoke a word to you and you didn't want to hear it,
So much she wanted to say - it was love and she could feel it,
But when you made it clear that you were going out with someone else,
She acted blind at first but then she couldn't pretend,
The way you kissed her and the way you held her close,
She hated it - she just wanted you to herself,
And she cried everyday once more,
She would get so weak that she would drop to the floor,
And her heart was nothing - she realized you didn't care if she cried,
You didn't want her so she died,
And when the teacher announced she was dead,
You sat there - nothing was going threw your head...
So now she's somewhere else,
And no one will ever know,
How much she wanted you to want her as well.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Wow...really enjoyed reading this poem and I felt a lot of sympathy for the character. I would have preferred it though if she hadn't died and had instead moved on and shown that guy what he was missing lol But the direction you took for the poem worked well and was written beautifully!

  • 17 years ago

    by amandalynn

    That was amazing. i loved that one also. 5/5

    xxMandaxx

    ps. u have gr8 talent

  • 17 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    I really like this poem.It was really good.the end really shocked me.great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by SomewhereAmongThePieces

    I really liked this poem until it got to the end and you were like "she was dead." I was shocked... I didn't feel the emotion of it because it was so abrupt...