I love it, it was beautiful, great job guys, wonderful!

Oh this was an ok poem i think the flow could use a little work but i really liked it 5/5

The flow was smooth, and the emotion true.
I loved this peice of your talent.
You did a wonderful job with Raveena and I applaud your guys work.
Well done,
Elaine. 5/5

This is so beautiful Goran, I am nearly in tears. This poem was full of such loving emotion and just the right touch of sadness. You never cease to amaze me with your ability to bring words to life. Keep up the wonderful work hun. 5/5

P.S This is going in my favorite poems list

This is really sad. I loved it. It was very emotional and touching. You two did an excellent job with this poem. 5/5

-Shannon <3

In the last stanza, know should be knew, I think. Anyway, this was beautiful and full of wonderfuly expressed emotions. Nice flow as well. 5/5

marcella

This poem was so heartfelt and so raw, it was amazing. The flow was flawless and the words you chose, it seemed to fit so perfectly. It was amazing, I loved it!