Nice poem. I think you should read over this and fix some errors like changing the 'to' in 'to many' into 'too'. I only point that out because it makes it difficult to focus fully on the meaning behind the poem while you're reading when you're thinking of someone's errors at the same time. But besides that I liked it! :)

--Lindsay.

Very good poem...from the heart...good job

ashleigh

Very poetic and creative lines. The second line is really beautiful and nicely ordered. I like this piece

Another good poem, wonderful job.

I don't like last stanza, ending is poor but this poem is excellent. Third stanza is my favorite one. I like the topic and you created great atmosphere. 5/5