Oh dear, this is great but so sad, you have really accomplished another great success in the path of poetry.
as always you are getting better and better, and now you are the best

another 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

I really like the ending this poem was great! the flow was awesome and you used strong words! beutifully done

Wow mousie, Excellent, the flow is awesome and the wordings are great. iT flows well and rymes well. Perfect 5/5 for sure :)

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That comment you had at the end yeah that happens to me so after I type them up on here I copy them and then if I loose it I can just paste it back on. ^_^ I really liked this poem. I liked the lonely pair part the best I think. I wish I could give it a four point something but I can't so I'll give it a five and do you a favor. :)

Sometimes it is the rewritten poems that are so powerful.. this is one of those...

--Sher