Ahhhhh sooo deep, but like easy to understand at the same time.. if you know what im saying.. good job.. realy enjoyed this one... sry it took me so long to return the favor
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Aww that's so sad, we don't all lie :) it was a beautiful heartfelt poem like all of yours are, i love it.

Oh thats sad there is such thing! but you wrote it beutifully 5/5

Gorhan, this poem was deep. It was well written and easy too understand.
But you must remember, it's not only girls that lie, guys lie too.
Still a wonderful read,
keep it up.
Elaine, 5/5.

Everyone lies and boys lie too you know.

Good job on this one i like it alot. Britt

Dude, if it was not something called lie, would would pain be?
we have pain becasue LIE exist in this facken life.

Realizing the reality and the truth behind the mask seem to be the theme of your poems,,,how true those words are....thats why you should never ever judge a person at first glance....judge when u learn then there will be no heartbraking or dissapointment...
u got to accept and learn my friend.
good luck, with ur love life,,,,u have to be a little be hard hearted...
take good care

A very true and touching piece. Emotion flowing from your words. You seem, angry? Betrayed? Annoyed?
Well Done, 5/5.
Greta, I posted in your bulletin the ones to comment of mine.
Take Care.

This is a new way of looking at an old problem. The poem is very original GOOD WORK

Wow a simple and short yet really touched my heart! The loneliness and aches of waitng and hoping for a person whom we wish to appreciate or notice us! well i'm kindda experiencing it too.. Love this one really!

Lovely choice of words and I feel where you are coming from with this one I enjoyed it very much.

Short but touched the hearts of many. A sad piece, but it was lovely. I've never read a poem like this before and I like that is original. I liked your choice of words for such a short poem and I can feel how upset you are about this. 5/5.

-Shannon <3

ItS lovelY & aN interestinG writinG....

luzaN

A short story, easy to understand for anyone who reads. Great emotional expression. The phrase, girlish lies, is rather sexist, but I guess in this case it fits for this poem considering the rest of its content. Still a great poem as always. 5/5

marcella

This poem is so cute, I loved the emotion you put into your words, yet there were barely any. You did so great to capture the full feeling in such short writing. Great Job, I just love your work!