Omg i really like it keep up the good work ! 5/5 |
This is really a great poem. Good feeling. I don't suppose you write songs do you? Because I got the general feeling from this that it could be a song... either way... it is BRILLIANT! It had raw emotion that I really liked! Excellent, keep it up! |
by halie
I loved it |
by Mandy
Great poem. |
by she
Alot of emotion in these words, my fav.:You drink away the lacy pain |
That was a awesome poem! keep up the awsesome work=) |