Your from above

by Garrett   Aug 9, 2007


Now i think ''why should i even try''
Almost every great moment has pasted me by
as i wright i look down at my wrist
and than i start to wonder about this
but than i remember our rainy kiss

Your love has saved me from myself
and for that i ow you my life and love
Your like an angle from above

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  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    This was short and sweet. it was simple yet you captured so much emotion that some people spend their whole lives trying to describe, and that others arent brave enough to feel. this was excellent. the wording was beautiful and the flow was strong.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I can relate alot
    this is very good i enjoyed reading it

    5/5
    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam

    Don't worry this isnt no hate thingy. i actually really really liked your poem. im not the greatest poem writer person thingy either.. lol. but i really liked your poem. alot of ppl could relate to it..................................................................................including me:)

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