My three year old broken heart

by Rose not your average   Aug 9, 2007


(this is in thought of one of my friends)
Mommy why did you abandon me?
Why did you pack up all my stuff and leave me on his doorstep?
Do you not love me?
Who is this man?

Why did you even bother coming back?
How can you say you love me?
You even forgot my birthday!
Maybe I should just take my life.

You broke my heart that day.
I always did pray!
Now I cant get close to anyone.
I am afraid of being abandoned.

I am like you and I fled.
I thought of how to die.
I thought of pills.
But it wouldnt do the trick.

Then I saw a gun.
And I knew I woulnt run.
There would be no more pain,
Or suffering.

Or my three year old broken heart.
From when you left me on his doorstep.
Then came back,
And made me sared!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Ryanne

    I can totally relate with this poem. my mom has never really been in my life. but i do give you total kudos for putting your heart into this poem. its REALLY GOOD. && thanks for my comment too. i meant alot. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    Wow, there's a lot of emotion in this poem ~ I think the ending could've been a little stronger but nonetheless it was great ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Again, you portray emotion well, there's a few grammatical errors. Spell check would fix it nice. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Maria

    Again I found this very sad....and if this did happen to one of your friends then I am very sorry to hear that it really is a shame. I liked it =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Nice poem...the flow was off a little in places. but i felt the emotion in this piece..nice job.

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