Great poem!! it gave my chills when i read it!! defitnaly a 5/5!!

Wow this poem is amazing
you made every word sapture the reader and i loved every line great job!!!

5/5

laura

I love this poem! nice work. and thats good u turn to god instead of other things.

I like this
it has a good point

Effective ending, very interesting perspective and overall absolutely creative piece. I like what you did with this poem, it has very unique thoughts and you wrote it with honesty that truly impressed me. Very clever work. Well done, I enjoyed very much.