by Tamsin Aug 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It's a sad smile, |
by Marc Ortiz
It's a fine written piece, good job. I think the flow was okay. I like the use of (...) in the last stanza.. It lets the reader pause and linger on your feelings. well done. |
by Kat
Wow. Great job! :) I really like the last stanza. It's one of thoes stanza's that I won't easily forget. Keep it up! 5/5 |
I like the way you used it from the begining to the end nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |