I like the way you used it from the begining to the end nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow. Great job! :) I really like the last stanza. It's one of thoes stanza's that I won't easily forget. Keep it up! 5/5

~Kat~

It's a fine written piece, good job. I think the flow was okay. I like the use of (...) in the last stanza.. It lets the reader pause and linger on your feelings. well done.

Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the comment.