by DeMipiE iNCxXDemiXx Aug 9, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
(Hint: Mind you its very unexplainable, and just a mess, thats how i like my poems) |
by Yuna
Wow. For a mixed poem, you did a very good job! I thought it a very powerful poem to read. I LOVED the ending. I don't know why, but it reached out and touched me, grabbing me in. It made me think and reread many times. It was very beautiful! i also liked how you had a story going to explain things. Keep writing!! Great job! |