The Mystery of Eve

by DeMipiE iNCxXDemiXx   Aug 9, 2007


(Hint: Mind you its very unexplainable, and just a mess, thats how i like my poems)

Shes beautiful
Long hair
but caputered by a witch
And taped to a chair

"Ive got to get away, escape this horrid place!"
Takes the knife, slits the tape
Takes the gun
Shot the witch in the heart
And now its time to get away

Persistantly running
Out of breath and her mind
Says its finished
Its go time

Rises the knife
Up to the moonlit sky
Try to drive it in her and...

Somone grabs her hand as she begins to cry..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    Wow. For a mixed poem, you did a very good job! I thought it a very powerful poem to read. I LOVED the ending. I don't know why, but it reached out and touched me, grabbing me in. It made me think and reread many times. It was very beautiful! i also liked how you had a story going to explain things. Keep writing!! Great job!