I usually don't really like poems that don't rhyme, but I loved this one. The imagery was beautiful, and loved the entire concept. You're a very talented writer. 5/5

How do you come up with this???

18 years old and yet you posess such a tremendous insight into your own life, the lives of others and even into the life through a childs eye. Keeki, your ability to put though and expression onto paper is undescribable. I am so glad that i get to chat to you on MSN now, as it will give me the oppertunity over time to learn some of what makes your mind so openly brilliant.

Love ur work hun

xx Matt xx