Hey that was a very good poem and well written , wording was great and very sad , a heartfelt write , but I really enjoyed reading it :::
Crash me, don't hesitate
this familiar feeling won't haunt me-
those are just loving memories of you
oh, I'll bury them, I'll burn them.
Great write , keep it up ,,, your friend Tracy d ,,,,,5/5

This is really good, I liked your choice of words :)

It was a wonderful poem, It flowed nicely, well done. I really like the last lines.. Also using it as a title is really good.

Keep up the good work!

The description was interesting and unique nice 4/5

Wow!!! This piece is amazingly written. You described emotions excellently. First stanza is great but third stanza is still my favorite one. Very deep and honest piece. I agree with message of this poem.
Well done, you should be proud on your self this one really deserves 5/5

I liked the sadness and imaginery all along the poem..You did a good job with the wording and topic

My fave lines are;

Cast a shadow on me-
please, let me fall.
We're divided with the
wall made of mirrors-
our reflections leave us blind.

Keep it up,
Laura

I really liked the ending to this poem! again alot of emoiton!
Crash me, don't hesitate
this familiar feeling won't haunt me-
those are just loving memories of you
oh, I'll bury them, I'll burn them.
i really liked that stanzas
this poem was very well put together

Very unique piece...read and re-read trying to find my favorite stanza...loved them all!! Heartfelt and enjoyed the word usage.

Hmm

I quite liked it, was different from what I usually read, though I didnt quite get it at first, but after it had sunk it, really liked it.

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I thought it would be diffrent that what it was! well done i really liked it again. you are a very good writer keep up the good work

I liked this poem it have a lot of emotion but again the flow was a little off the subject however was very intense to read about.

Well written and good meaning to the poems, like the icecles hanging from the eyelashes a lot. Well done :)

Excellent poem....this piece flowed nicely and was very well written..it had alot of feeling in it..and the ending is my favorite part.5/5 from me.

This wasnt my favourite poem. i think it was really good, and it flowed well. It just wasnt what i expected.
but a good job anyway
love Tara-Kay
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Absolutely outstanding. 5/5