Solitude

by Tiny Reader   Aug 9, 2007


As I stand here facing you
The light fades from the world.
Your stunning face, immersed in shadows
My heart, baring too much weight.

Then as you turn, my fingers tremble
My toes burn and hairs stand on end.
With each step more fragments leave my soul
And I'm left - an empty shell.

The hillside on which my body remains
Is a broken, desolate place.
Around it stands so much happiness
Laughing, pitying me.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Great poem. You expressed emotions excellently and created superb imagery. Very deep and touching piece. It deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow short, sad and very nice 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, every stanza is excellently written. It is very emotional, I can relate to it.
    The first stanza is my favorite.
    5/5 from me