Captivating. Gosh, you took my breath away with this work. It was something I thoroughly could correlate with -- an unrequited love. There's nothing much more dramatic than this kind of love, I believe.

When you said, "If it was I his love would be tamed, His heart and soul would never have to be blue", it made me connect to the time when I felt so aggravated with the same situation as you (or the character) are in. I further liked the thought of taming love. It's truly capturing.

Bittersweet.