by BreakMyWingsAndRun Aug 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I insert the knife deep in my vain |
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Thats how i feel at all times. like theres something i just can't do to run from all the pain so i cut to keep steady. beautifully written |
by SheenaMarie
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Incredible write 5/5 |
by Jessie
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REally good, really great story, and i liked the way you did... rhyme, rhyme, blah, rhyme.... But I do believe it could have flowed a bit better:) really goood job otherwise though |
by Blaketooken
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Wow amber..good job...that kind of stuff really happened...they finally realize what they lost until after its gone. Great job. Hey check out my new poems "hurt" and "he said". Thanks. |
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I love this poem girl |