by BreakMyWingsAndRun Aug 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I insert the knife deep in my vain |
Thats how i feel at all times. like theres something i just can't do to run from all the pain so i cut to keep steady. beautifully written |
by SheenaMarie
Incredible write 5/5 |
by Jessie
REally good, really great story, and i liked the way you did... rhyme, rhyme, blah, rhyme.... But I do believe it could have flowed a bit better:) really goood job otherwise though |
by Blaketooken
Wow amber..good job...that kind of stuff really happened...they finally realize what they lost until after its gone. Great job. Hey check out my new poems "hurt" and "he said". Thanks. |
I love this poem girl |