Bleeding For You

by BreakMyWingsAndRun   Aug 9, 2007


I insert the knife deep in my vain
pull it out with agony and pain.
i should have never said i love you
cause i knew you would never feel the same.

i watch blood run from my wrist
as i quickly ball up my fist.
i thought you were perfect
right after we kissed.

i stick the hook in the center of my back
it pierced the skin just like a tack.
i think of all our memories
then i start to pack.

As i walk out of town
i start to get weak and then fall down.
Blood puddles surround my body
then i start to fade as i can't hear a sound.

I died bleeding for you
now knowing all our dreams would never come true.
but just before i died i heard you say
you've finally realized you loved me too.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Frannie Swanson

    Thats how i feel at all times. like theres something i just can't do to run from all the pain so i cut to keep steady. beautifully written

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Incredible write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    REally good, really great story, and i liked the way you did... rhyme, rhyme, blah, rhyme.... But I do believe it could have flowed a bit better:) really goood job otherwise though

  • 16 years ago

    by Blaketooken

    Wow amber..good job...that kind of stuff really happened...they finally realize what they lost until after its gone. Great job. Hey check out my new poems "hurt" and "he said". Thanks.

    keani lovez koa

  • 16 years ago

    by desperately needing you

    I love this poem girl