Excellent work cindy, imagery is immaculate, very heartbreaking yet an incredible write, keep it up |
Cindy , that was a beautiful poem a very heartfelt write and very sad but still full of memories of that special love in your life , those are memories they can't take away , great job my friend, I truly enjoy this poem , take care , your friend Tracy d, 5/5 |
by debbylyn
Beautiful snapshot of a beautiful love.....though only the pictures remain tangible.....the essence of the emotions are eternal....and will live on in the hearts of your beautiful grandchildren..... |
by Bryan
This is a very good poem cindy, paints a picture of pure love and sorrow intertwinded, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! |
by June
A very touching write and so beautifully written. |
by Adelle
I love the poem I have been reading some of your other work, this is NOT criticism I was just trying to work out weather you left all the punctuation out to create effect or whether it was an accident either way it's an amazing poem. 5/5 |
Cindy, |
by Debbie
This is truly heartrending and bittersweet, yet wonderful and lovely at the same time. How you put heartfelt emotions within your words never ceases to amaze me. :) All the best and take care, Miss Cindy! Love, Debbie. |
by Kelsie
This is really beautiful 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
Wow this was simply beautiful :) I really like the story of the poem.. And the title really grabs the reader's attention. You're amazing. Flow was flawless.. |
by Emily
Very good poem...written perfectly |
Hi cindy!! i'm back now. i was struggling but now, i'm doing well!!! ur poems are as wonderful as ever, please come back and read mine as well, as well as i am reading yours once again. |
This is one of the best poems i have read on this site. |
by Veamm
Same as the old ones..nice keep it up..take care..^^5/5 for it |
by moonlil
My god, this poem is absolutely wonderful and i can relate to every word. I simply love it. Great work like always! |
This is very very Nice Poem..... Specially I like this stanza. |