by Tracy D Rollings Aug 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Life is very funny at times |
by Ingrid
This is a good poem. I liked reading it. I think when people meet for the first time they do their best to be nice and polite. After a while they forget and then we see the person behind the mask. I think true love, even with friends, is when you love a person in spite of their bad habits and flaws. |
Tracy, I love your message in this poem. Yet, there are a few grammatical errors and such. That can break the flow of the poem. The emotion behind the piece is very present, though. Loved it :) |
Tracy, |
by Phil
Another great read, good emotion in this wow, keep up the good work |