Dreamer

Wow this one is my favourite I guess.
I can relate to this, it's nice to live in a imaginary world sometimes since the real world has so many ugly things.
Again i would have changed the coz here as wel,but i think it's like a stop word to you and stop words are hard to let go i guess.

"Hoping that I can stay there forever
More than a fantasy created by my head
But I know I'm just a dreamer
And I know this dream will soon be dead"

Yes and then you realise you have to go back to the reality world again...
wow, wow i LOVED this.

5/5

xo take care

angelique

You described what it's like being a dreamer well. How dreams and fantasies make people happy but sooner or later reality comes it and kills it. It has an inspiring meaning.

Wonderful, fantastic, original, heartwarming, talent filled. Great job, this was amazing. I loved it from beginning to end!!

Another great poem from you....its amazing.. alot of emotion and this is true for alot of people ..

the flow is perfect and the rhyme is perfect also.no need for improving on this.5/5

Your poem said alot to me. I now know Im not the only one who drifts into the thoughts in my head. The only place where Im not judged or casted out for being who I am and how I feel.
I thank you and hope to soon write my own thoughts. Continue on your writing.