Very sad piece you have penned The emotions are very heartfelt.

Please, just speak,
Why is it that I cannot break free,
Of this love that confines,
Slowly breaking this poor heart of mine.

Thes lines are awesome.
Take care Cindy

Yes, this was such a truly sad write. It is so hard to break the cycle of being hurt. I guess sometimes we want to hear what they have to say but we are afraid of the answer we will get if they do.

That was a wonderful poem , very sad and well penned, , a lot heartfelt emotions and well written , love hurts and thats something we all have to get use to, even though we don't like too ,great write , keep it up ,your friend ,,, Tracy d 5/5

"One can only take so much,
If only wishes could bring that touch."

^ The pain and longing drawn out by that couplet endeared the poem to me. I believed almost everyone could relate to this piece, including me. It's so bittersweet; Love is bittersweet.
Really now, nice piece. :)

Wow...That was sad....Realy sad...It was so Amazing..I don't know how to describe it....

Great Job

5/5....^_^