ItS a finE piecE of worK, thaT thrilleD uS greatlY....

luzaN

Hmmm that was short. but full of emotions. take care. and you deserve 5/5

A short, very nice poem.
The emotions were very clear.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

I am really happy to read your poems again and again and comment....
Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

Nazeer

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

I'm very familiar with being stuck for nothing. In fact, I think at this right moment I'm stuck. It really sucks, I wish I could get out of this place. Anyway, I like your poem, I can identify with it. =)

VerY mucH fascinatinG. keeP yR writinG tO shimmeR likE aS thiS onE.... 5/5.

'wheN'

luzaN

HI verY nicE......

luzaN

Wow!... I really like this one!
its beautiful... <3

Love it! It is beautiful!!! Really it is beautiful...

Nazeer

GooD meaningS..... 5/5

Great write =]..i love it <3