by joe m durham Aug 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I was so weak, so broken so lost and confused my hearts been torn tattered and used. The touch of her skin makes me want to cry because I know I love this girl its been while now were so close she's like my drug, my overdose more years went by and I felt great |
by oddi tea
Beautifully sad. it is such a down to earth poem. I love it, great job! |
Whos it about? but its good i loved it |
by Domino0792
This gal seems like she has the world lay at her feet by you. Someone very lucky indeed, both of you are. Some people go their entire life searching for love, some have it thrust upon them, others merely glance at it or see it but not experience it. Great poem. Loving it. |
by danielle
OMG one of your best i really love this i can see you really like this girl shes lucky to have someone like you to care so much for her anyways good job keep it up 5/5 :) |