by Goran Rahim Aug 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Ripping apart my innocent heart, |
by Avan Ahmad
There isnt enough words to descirbe this beautiful poem trust me on this. Dast Xosh. |
Wow this was so good, you're such a great poet, but I'm sure you hear that all the time. But the poem was beautiful, emotional, definantly a 5/5!! |
by TracyM
Wow, i can really feel the pain and sadness it this poem, along withe the love. its beautifully well written. |
Excellent. Very heartfelt and touching, but also sad. I think it was beautifully written and I love your word choice, especially in the opening line. This poem also flowed really well. Good Job. |
by Vanessa
Creative, simple, intresting, excellent word choice, again you have written a nicely penned poem Keep up the good work. 5/5 |