Goran, this was intensely heart felt, i know the feeling you are feeling/felt b4. the constant pain, and it was shown throughout this poem.

your emotive words at the start entice the reader to feel sorrow for you, (which i do for you) . the second stanza was full of broken love, it was extremely filled with heart breaking words...

i wish you well, the question now is, will you ever let her go?

5/5, your friend David

This pain would not leave us alone , cause love is part of your beautiful heart and you should know, if you are nice to others, you will end up in pain and take it as a fact not just my opinion.

The sweet simplicity of this piece was truely beautiful I can't express how much I enjoyed this poem. A little bit different in what i'm use to reading with yours, yes it's a love poem which is greatly written in death but you've added a new flavour and spark. Gorgeous piece. Well done yet again. ~mel

Not bad. Pretty intense emotion.

Wow....This poem is so sweet....It was really unique...You have described your emotions really well.....
And thank you for your comment on my poem...
It truely means a lot to me..
Take care

I like this one. the flow seemed a bit off at times but it didn't affect anything. i feel the same way. beautifully written. great write. and thankyou for the comment.

Very cute, I really liked this one. I somewhat got lost near the middle, but your ending was so sweet. It was great!!

Creative, simple, intresting, excellent word choice, again you have written a nicely penned poem Keep up the good work. 5/5

Excellent. Very heartfelt and touching, but also sad. I think it was beautifully written and I love your word choice, especially in the opening line. This poem also flowed really well. Good Job.

-Shannon <3

Wow, i can really feel the pain and sadness it this poem, along withe the love. its beautifully well written.

xx trace

Wow this was so good, you're such a great poet, but I'm sure you hear that all the time. But the poem was beautiful, emotional, definantly a 5/5!!

There isnt enough words to descirbe this beautiful poem trust me on this. Dast Xosh.