Comments : No such thing as the perfect world

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a very deep and strong poem. You can really feel the hatered you have for that person. It is amazingly strong. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is such a heartfelt poem and the wordings are really straightforward and powerful. I love the content of this piece. Well done

    tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by vampy

    Great poem! it reminds me of some ppl

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very strong poem...i like it... although there are a few typos in this one. but still i give you a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Im guessing that was a poem to say a **c* you to someone! nice wording

    one thing though..
    You cannot control me.
    I will live my life,
    Not hat you want me to live
    you spelt that wrong lol

    nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    I hate poems like this.. not because of how you wrote it or anything.. but because it's something that totally could be dedicated to me.

    It's well written.. I like it alot.