Dark-some solitude

by SeGrAdA   Aug 10, 2007


Sitting alone in this filthiness,
grieving at this killing emptiness
known as my life.
What sin have I committed
to be buried alive
in the tortured souls shouts & cries.
Feel like drowning in a perpetual sea,
trying to reach out but no one hears.
Until i get lacerated by my fears,
nothing to solace me but my tears.
In every second i will suffer,
so why waiting for some one
who cares about no other.
Why waiting for a sun to shine
for a light to break the darkness of the line
that separate my dreams from my real life.
Don't want to go back to the real ground,
don't want to see any person around.
I just want to stay in this
shoddy dreams of mine
in this dark-some solitude till i die

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well written & truly felt... Your feelings & sorrow are drifted in your words.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    Such an intense poem with greatly expressed emotion... The flow of the words is amazing and so is the amount of imagination in it...
    Nicely written.. 5/5!

    Thanx for the comment. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Amazing poem, keep up the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Wow brillaint poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , wonderfully written and the wording was unique , yet haunting with very deep and sad emotions over flowing it, love the thrill of it,
    Don't want to go back to the real ground,
    don't want to see any person around.
    I just want to stay in this
    shoddy dreams of mine
    in this dark-some solitude till i die
    you put me in this , where I fit so well, great write , very talent your friend Tracy d.............5/5

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