So do i, i hope they are ok, they pull thru. this was so emotional and short, it was effectively full of shock and unknowing.

5/5 David

Wow a poem with smooth transition i liked it, its like as if the poem went as fast as this event happened in the poem very nice 5/5

In this short life it all goes oue but now he's flying accross the green fields and the high mountains by rivers of elixir of life , 5/5