It's not over (401)

by NinjaGirl   Aug 10, 2007


I can see the end
It's straight ahead
I did you wrong
All along
And now I'm paying up...

I'm half alive
Broken inside
I can't survive
I've lied and lied
Now it's my turn...

I'm feeling vulnerable
It's my time to fall
To get down and crawl
I could never stand tall
Because I lied to you...

I close my eyes
Waiting for it to come
But it's not over
Til the fat lady sings
And there's no fat ladies in my story
So I guess that I win...

This time...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    This poem is very moving and sad, I love how you've started the poem all the way to the end.
    5/5 Keep it up kayz? xoxo I love reading your poems, they inspire me xD

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear.

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

    thiS iS luzaN froM NZ

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad piece you have penned. The feelings of sadness and guilt come through in your words.

    I'm half alive
    Broken inside
    I can't survive
    I've lied and lied
    Now it's my turn...

    These lines really stand out.
    Take Care Cindy

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