Very sad piece you have penned. The feelings of sadness and guilt come through in your words.

I'm half alive
Broken inside
I can't survive
I've lied and lied
Now it's my turn...

These lines really stand out.
Take Care Cindy

YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

thiS iS luzaN froM NZ

Its a beautiful and a nice job! well done dear.

Nazeer

This poem is very moving and sad, I love how you've started the poem all the way to the end.
5/5 Keep it up kayz? xoxo I love reading your poems, they inspire me xD