I love the entire feel of this poem. It's poetry like this I wish I could write without it sounding corny, but this is fantastic! :) And the flow and rhyme scheme was great too. Wonderful job. 5/5!
~Midnight Sun

I think you did a great job. Definately an awesome ending...

Awwww
haha this is cute.
love it.
its kind of a sweet light poem that puts a smile on anyones face.
cute.
much love .xx

Jenni,

I really enjoyed this poem ~ very well written.

Connie

Another fantastic poem written by you, very good job indeed, kepp writing.